Over recent years, the trend of having a gap year before enrolling in universities has become popular within youngsters. This trend has plethora of benefits and drawbacks. This essay discusses both deeply.
Firstly, working in distinct fields for a time period results in gain in knowledge and an opportunity to find area of ones interest for choosing a course for further studies. Secondly, travelling has some advantages also such as a person can explore many areas of his/her nation and develop a good friend circle of different backgrounds, fields and locations which is of course beneficial for a youngster in his/her work life.
However, as every coin has two sides, it has some disadvantages also. Firstly, a gap year has a profound impact on a student's study. A candidate might find it difficult to continue study after a long time. Moreover, a student could change his goal completely, if he starts earning at early age which could distract him to continue at study and remain working at job.
To recapitulate, a gap year has both pros and cons. It results in increase in knowledge and other positive outcomes when youngsters plan this time period carefully, but it can disturb their's study also.
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- Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child's education. Do you agree and disagree? Give reason for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. 56
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- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this? 56
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...efully, but it can disturb theirs study also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02475247525 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74727498642 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8972321507 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177202975537 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580967508731 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421763212867 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896960636234 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489218481443 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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