Living in large cities today poses many problems for people.
What are these problems?
Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?
In the era of civilisation, people are migrating from suburbs to gigantic cties. Individuals are facing a plethora of issues regarding a lot of things like traffic congestion, living expances so on also govenrment authorities are pushing their boundary to develope country side to encorage mankinds to settle in villages.
To begin with, people who are live in large cities facing problems of overpopulation which is detrimental for not only themself but also it's affects the surrounding. Traffic congestion is taking place all over the prime locations of the cities. Due to overcrowd its is very difficult for an individual to travel from one location to another. Another problem is that big cities's living expanse is too much high. Average income earner could not be able to survive in this cut throat competition which directly ameliorate mental stress of an individual. For instance, according to TIMES OF INDIA it had reviewed that jobseekers who came to mumbai(India) for works are now shifting back to their villages due to expensive lifestyle of mumbai city.
However, government should starts to inograte such schem to attract people from all regions to start living in smaller town with developed facilities. Authorities should able to provide more and more amenities for development of business sectors so that pleople might get start to migrate to sunurb. This will also elevates the job opporunities in that region and cater job to needy jobseekers. To exemlpfy, govenment of India has started one schem called GRAM JINODHWAR YOJANA. In which rular area developed at the higher rate and this programme also produced more numbers of job opportunities for the village itself.
In conclusion, it could be recapitulate that people who settled in large cities are suffer from major problem of overpopulation and expenditures whereas government is trying to alleviates the facilities in rural part so that source of income can be generate for needy people in that particular area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elevate'
Suggestion: elevate
...rt to migrate to sunurb. This will also elevates the job opporunities in that region and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
... people who settled in large cities are suffer from major problem of overpopulation an...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'alleviate'.
Suggestion: alleviate
...ditures whereas government is trying to alleviates the facilities in rural part so that so...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.234375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86279849699 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603125 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6392264174 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278124438184 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829734158775 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858080308737 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15313521756 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474358500285 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.