A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
a number of regions in the world depend on tourism as their main source of earnings. Therefore, it can also be a source of trouble if touristy is not operated correctly. I firmly hold the view that the benefits pale in comparison with the drawbacks that this trend provides.
On the one hand, tourism plays a vital role in the economy of both the government and regional people. When guests visit an attractive place, they tend to splurge their money for good service: booking cars, hotels, trying the local cuisine, or some outdoor activities, for instance. In this way, travel can not only boost the locals' income, on the contrary also the GDP of this country. Additionally, a good experiment of foreigner is a case in point as the main way to improve tourism, that is why in a number of regions, the government focus on the tourism sector in order to enhance the economy of the country.
Besides the advantages of tourism, if the government does not manage it correctly, it will bring big harm to this landscape and the local people. Firstly, the weak rule can not prevent tourists throw rubbish away from the public. A telling example is that there are various plastic on the coast or leftovers on the road. Moreover, run by the profit of travel, a number of companies are willing to destroy the amount of forest, field, and greenery to build numerous hotels or resorts. This can result in harm to the natural, environment and take numerous of time to recover.
To conclude, traveler brings to both the state and regional people a plethora of benefits, in contrast, drawbacks are more significant. It seems to me that we need to add some strict rules for the visitor and local companies to decrease the disadvantages of touristy.
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- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world Do you think that the be 73
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world Do you think that the be 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
a number of regions in the world depend o...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'locals'' or 'local's'?
Suggestion: locals'; local's
...this way, travel can not only boost the locals income, on the contrary also the GDP of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75247524752 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60870578662 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4429162357 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2077756314 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067150687922 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825319877398 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120684033871 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925996230296 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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