A lot of places in the world rely in tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly
Nowadays, some countries around the world depend on the sector of tourism as one of its primary source of income for the local people. Although this is beneficial to lessen their financial burden, sometimes this creates a negative impact on the environment and the community may suffer if natural resources are overexploited.
The two main advantages of the developed tourism industry is a boost in the local and national economy and creating more job opportunities for the local people. Firstly, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotel, transportation, amusements, and food. This way, tourism yields an additional income greatly supporting the country's economy. Secondly, it increases job opportunities for the locals. For instance, the influx of tourists results in larger demand in restaurant workers, tour guides, hotel staff, exhorting business owners to hire more individuals for these positions.
Tourism also has some major disadvantages like the disruption of natural habitat and accelerated pollution. Pristine islands that are not popular yet are promoted as a tourist spot in different platforms like social media and other websites so that tourist will be enticed to visit the place. In order for the place to be presentable and breathtaking, the local government beautifies and redevelop the area by building structures to make their stay comfortable. Hence, trees and plants are cut and some wild animals are eradicated or transferred to animal shelter. Moreover, a large number of tourists can cause environmental problems due to accumulated tons of garbage that they throw in famous places and beaches. The foul smell from this rubbish would permeate in the air and to bodies of water, thus affecting the other living organism that could lead to ecological catastrophes. However, proper hospitality management, saving natural resources and correct usage of tourism revenue by the government can eliminate these disadvantages.
To conclude, although tourism has certain disadvantages like destructive effects in the environment, it has an extremely positive impact on country’s economy and provides an additional jobs for the people. I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54360465116 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04035721114 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.961398374 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189205602738 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553485173047 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509179454254 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101050121311 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346535464575 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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