It is a fact that when big cities are developing these days, many young people living there tend to cope with plenty of problems. This essay will highlight some of the main problems of this and suggest several viable approaches to reduce the adverse effects resulting from the rapid growth of cities.
From up to now, most cities are undergoing the golden age of development about technology and sciences, so several related problems can be anticipated when young people have settled there. To start with, high unemployment rate can be under consideration to be one of the most serious issues they have to deal with. Take Ha Noi in Viet Nam as a typical example, it has a reputation for diverse aspects namely business term having lots of huge conglomerate organizations, appealing entertainment, so it is not too hard to comprehend that it attracts more youth to come there for working and settling. As a result, this trend will make their work chances much more competitive, because not only are they intelligent, a handful number of ones being the same age are likely far excellent and energetic than them. This is a reason that why some young people can not create an impression with their recruiters as well as their counterparts; therefore, looking for a descent job may be much harder than before. Obviously, stress and pressure seem to be an alarming phenomenon for adolescent due to facing financial burden when not having a stable profession. Nevertheless, developed municipalities could be a dangerous place because it contains potentially social evils. Although it is vibrant, some of entertainment forms like bars and pubs illegally acting addicts some young ones. Without controlling of parents, they could engage in illicit actions such as using drugs, savagery, fraud, smuggling and even becoming sex offender victim at a too young age. Living in the big cities may be assumed as an conscious problem getting all people to concern.
However, there are some viable remedies to handle or at least alleviate those issues. Firstly, they stem from partly their parents. The rate of pressure in adolescent who live in cities has been increased recently, piecemeal as they have to come up against being out of work on their own, vitally when they are living in a novelty city. So parents should lend a sympathetic ear to them, encourage them in mental aspect, at least it can help them get over the problems, and for ones who prefer to come to bars or clubs, do not condemn them exceedingly, just advise gradually. Parents had better be warm and supportive them. Besides, governments and leaders can have ability to raise awareness of young people to penetrate how serious social evils are and teach them how to balance between work and life.
In conclusion, although living in extravagant cities would lead the young to being stand- off and facing to social evils, some solutions for parents and leaders, have been proven their feasibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, at least, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 494.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97975708502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71727185962 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 176.041082164 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568825910931 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4091225504 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.473684211 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273342495398 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079701042747 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640004254552 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167703262694 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305203331048 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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