Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games.
Why do they do this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
In the concurrent time, young people show their interest in video games as a way of passing their free time. There are many reasons behind it and I think it has both merits as well as drawbacks.
There are a number of reasons why people play video games in their free time. One possible reason is the sophistication of the internet and technology. As technology are becoming more advance nowadays, young people can get easy access to different online platform which eventually increases their interest in video games. Another reason is the insufficient land for playing outdoor games because of urbanization as well as the growing population. For example, when a young boy doesn’t find any place to play, he definitely finds himself playing different video games.
In my opinion, playing video games can bring a lot of benefits for adults however I can't deny the disadvantages of it. The first benefit of involving in video games is that it helps them to outsource from it. By playing video games, young people can join several online gaming competitions which helps them to earn money as well as increase their self-reliance. On the other hand, playing online games can be the reason of adults' bad health conditions. For instance, young people Will face different health-related issues when they become addicted to online games.
In conclusion, young people tend to play video games because of the availability of the internet as well as some other factors are also associated with it. While I think playing such kinds of games is beneficial, young people should play video games only for a considerable amount of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69904026259 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0576485417 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171629858679 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779584213337 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065403636238 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129136099956 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232864470373 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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