These days, human activities have seriously contributed to animals’ extinction. This essay will outline some causes and give suggestions to solve and deal with this phenomenon.
There are 2 main reasons that bring about the disappearance of animals. One of the most important reasons causing this issue is the development of industrialization, modernization, and human demands. Deforestation has to be processed to expand urban areas and build many factories, industries, and shopping centers. As a result, this has led to the loss of animal food and habitats, which makes animals can be killed, caught, or even die out over time. Secondly, the amount of untreated waste and sewage from factories mostly discharged into the ocean and river has increased dramatically. This activity pollutes clean water and leads to the extinction of sea creatures, especially killing some rare animals such as blue whales or dolphins.
Therefore, there are some effective solutions to deal with this problem. To begin with, the government should implement animal protection policies and heavily fine people who have harmed animal habitats. For instance, the government should strictly check waste that is going to be discharged into the environment, or excessive use of pesticides in agriculture. If there are some illegal actions, the government should apply laws to punish these people. Furthermore, we should raise people’s awareness by applying and propagating some lessons and information about the importance of flora and fauna. Therefore, they can have a better understanding of natural habitats and take actions to protect the environment. Last but not least, some conservation areas should be constructed to preserve some rare and endangered animals like pandas and jaguars
In conclusion, many human activities can result in the disappearance of animals and harm the environment. We need to take some essential measures to protect our animals and prevent them from extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51315789474 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06934512582 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6582075816 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297564285134 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858104184117 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810240562249 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191532656749 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550993221142 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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