Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
In this contemporary time, the healthcare of subsequent generations has been put on high on the agenda. While it is believed that parents should compulsorily utilise vaccines as a remedial measure, many others propose that making use of vaccines should depend on their choices to protect their children from diseases.
On the one hand, compulsory immunisation seems to be a potential measure to insure children's health in their formative years. As a matter of course, vaccines inhibit youngsters’ from prevalent illnesses which may lead to citizens in good physical condition. Besides, governments thereby show their interest to the subsequent generation and their efforts in enhancing the quality life of human beings. Once citizens are met their needs in all aspects of their life, they will much more concentrate on generating revenue to serve their country.
On the other hand, there is no denying that the economic gap between high-income and low-income classes assuredly exists in any society. Therefore, immunising enforcement possibly put an economic pressure on parents who do not have the ability to serve their children with exorbitant healthcare services. Moreover, scientists have researched that some vaccines may exert detrimental effects on youngsters’ health. Hence, it is not advised to use vaccines with wide coverage as children may suffer from many other illnesses against components included in vaccines.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the vaccines’ benefits that potentially improve human state of health, it is strongly believed that vaccines sometimes are regarded as an adverse counter-effective remedy for humans. Therefore, what parents necessitate doing is taking vaccines into account to make an optimal decision for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75563909774 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12772917741 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5880518869 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.583333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217949737415 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787802764771 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715239289659 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134216312627 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481485415292 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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