Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children.
These days, vaccines are playing a pivotal role in preventing the widespread of humans’ diseases to keep children from potential health risks. Therefore, a debate rises from the proposal that national law require that parents immunize their children against common illnesses with vaccines. However, I personally think that this proposal is violating humans’ privacy rights and even creating negative impacts.
Firstly, parents now have the right to raise their children in any ways they deem right. When governments let parents immunize their children, they are likely to appropriate parental permission. In fact, parents know the family's historical health status, so they tend to more thoroughly understand their children's possibilities to catch diseases than governments do. Therefore, without the law of immunizing children, parents are able to estimate the chances of their children catching common diseases to decide whether to use the vaccines to control and even take care of their children’s health more meticulously.
Secondly, there are some reported cases where children are negatively affected after vaccination. It lies in the fact that vaccines, although are weakened agents unable to initiate infection, they can still put considerable pressure on humans’ immunization system. Those substances, in fact, go through babies’ internal organs and then accommodate them to cause side effects. In Vietnam, for instance, the use of vaccines makes children lacking antibodies die or deal with illnesses for a long time.
To put it in a nutshell, I think parents should not be made by law to immunize their children because of their parental rights and the unsure effects of vaccines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to initiate infection, they can still put considerable pressure on humans’ imm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59230769231 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82757972489 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5097211105 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402079464642 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140702135107 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105710437603 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241014297558 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107664340512 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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