Many children these days have their own mobile phones what are the advantages and disadvantages of it.
it is an incontrovertible fact that today mobile phones are reaching the pockets of everybody in this world. Most of children have their own phones and they are using it for various purposes. This essay exams the merits and demerits of this notion in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are myriad of reasons why the uses of mobile are harmful for kids. The first is that children are very innocent and they can easily target by thieves who can snatch their mobile phones from their hands. This situation can be extremely dangerous for the Infant in some cases. Secondly, the mobile waves harm their body and they are suffering with many of problems because of it. For example, it is scientifically proven that today most of the kids have weak eyesight due to often uses of mobile phones.
To continue with my viewpoints, they can distract from their studies by the overuse of cell phones. To Instant, majority of kids are using it for entertainment purpose and doing the chat on social networking sites in that way, they cannot concentration on their studies. As well as, they are suffering the internet on various effect website and in the sites some are not beneficial for them which can be very harmful for their tender minds.
On the other hand, it has some benefit for the Infant. Nowadays, adolescent are living in a technical error and mobile are a boon for them in some ways. A good relation for this sometime children are sucking in critical situation. So, in that time if they have mobile phones they can call their parents. In addition to this, they can gain a lot of knowledge through it uses some educational applications and watches some educational videos on YouTube.
In conclusion, each coin has two sides and the mobile have some cons and pros for children. However, they would be use the mobile phone in the supervision of their parents then they will have only advantage of it.
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| 2019-11-03 | Motu | 67 | view |
| 2019-10-24 | Naman Kumar Singh | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is an incontrovertible fact that today ...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the children') or simply say ''Most children''.
Suggestion: Most of the children; Most children
...the pockets of everybody in this world. Most of children have their own phones and they are usin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75975975976 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50758482915 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510510510511 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4906919244 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238486301395 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890584063066 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844979647567 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165765527965 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794561252477 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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