Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is argued, that both educational institutions and family upbringing influence an unhealthy lifestyle of generation. This essay agrees both parents and school are accountable to tackle the problens about unwhole some way of life of modern children. Firstly this essay will discuss role of family and secondly will discuss how significant is school to set a healthy lifestyle for kids.
Admittedly, parents are the majn caregivers and spend more time with their children since one's birth. They teach first living skills. It means they not only provide their kids with meal and clothes but also give direction to indulge in sports, being occupied with useful activities, to follow a balanced diet instead of spend long hours in front of television and computers and possessing harmful habits. In addition, they serve as an example to children how lead to healthy lifestyle. As evidence, researches have found , that the most orphans live in unwholesome way of life.
On the other hand, educational institutions have a particular role on build foundation for independence life of children. In this part of their life each elementary things could influence their lifestyle. For instance, if in school bannet are prepeared only fresh, healthy, nutritional foods, kids have not opportunity to eat junk food and consume beverage drinkings during their study time. Moreover, there are some schoolss that have an exacting control and punish students who have a harmful habits such as smoking or taking a drug. In addition, it would be more effective, if teacher carry out extracurricular activities about healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, both parents and schools have a relevant role to set a healthy lifestyle for generation. In may point of view, they should supervise children that did not go on unhealthy mode of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23287671233 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80291855621 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4483237737 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260711226859 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831472634409 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519168974676 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160614599143 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405375935281 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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