In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?
Nowadays, there are many people to research on crimes. All of which show a sharp increase in the number of crimes. I believe there is a reason for this and the government should have the necessary methods to decrease the crime levels.
The primary reason why the number of crimes is more and more rising is the low standard of living. Recent years, there are differences between rich people and poor people. While the rich people live in penthouses, maisions; Drive modern cars and have high salary; The poor people are distinguised. They do not have opporunities to find jobs which are suitable with them. Hence, they feel bored and feel deep resentment against rich people. Thus, they can cause burglaries. Another reason is the lack of education. Teenagers, school drop outs and umemployment are main components which can become crimes. They have shortness of awarness in their actions. For example, a high school student easily change into robber because being affected by bad guys.
Because of these reasons, the government needs to help reduce crime levels. Firstly, they can create more and more jobs for poor people. For instance, the government should give them community careers with a medium salary such as: labor, nanny, etc. Advancing awarness of people is another important method which the government need to wok. They ought to hold the campaigns to propagandize the penalty which people will be received when they sin. The government also needs focus on young people who have dropped out schools. These teenagers may become involved with gangs. To eliminate the number of crime, prison is the punishment should be used. If the crimes are more critical, death penalty is the best way to punish.
To sum up, the impact of the growth of crime affect to everybody. So the government should effectuate necessary mothods to reduce them. Besides, eveyone have to clearly understand the law.
- The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in differents years. The grap shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurant and sit down restaurants. 56
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 61
- In many cities crime is increasing Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce crime levels 83
- The table below provide informationon rental charges and salaries in three areas of London 56
- money spent on books in 4 countries 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l bored and feel deep resentment against rich people. Thus, they can cause burgla...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02848101266 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46430006203 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8996569013 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.56 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.64 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16731659603 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456080597347 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053648797124 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107529140562 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222007992807 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.