Task 2: As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should cover the costs. Discuss and give your opinion?
Due to the development of technology, more and more cars are producted and sold. Hence, the amount of money spent on road systems increases day by day. Some opinions say thay the government should pay for this but the other think that people should cover the costs. I believe that both of which are necessary.
Firstly, the goverment have responsibility provide the well life for people. That is reason why the goverment should pay out for road systems. Besides, the goverment give lots of taxes on transportation so they should you the money which were received from taxes to pay for repairing and advancing road systems. For example, the Da Nang goverment built lots of bridges, roads to prevent people from traffic jam and make the spirit of people become happy.
Secondly, people have to give their hand to build the road systems. The reason is that people spent many time on driving to their companies, their homes or even their picnics. If the highways were decreased in its qualities, bulk of mistakes belongs to the drivers who drive strucks, cars, motobikes. In instances, the repairing cost for a higway is 100 millions dong, drivers should pay out 50 millions. The another part will be for the government. This cooperation will bring a incisive relationship between the government and local people.
To sum up, the responsibility which spent on road systems not belong to individual person. When the drivers pay out for bulding road systems, they will received the best service. On the other hand, if the goverment use money for this, they will have a big support from local people. All of this will make contry become develope in economic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...government. This cooperation will bring a incisive relationship between the gover...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'receive'
Suggestion: receive
...out for bulding road systems, they will received the best service. On the other hand, if...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8896797153 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54925019601 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533807829181 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9463767532 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349639107334 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103912245044 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10642486058 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223018251563 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108277270204 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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