In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation?
it is true that people who lived in the cities can build the ideal houses and office buildings by joining in the design and construction process. Although this may have several advantages, I believe that the drawbacks may greater than the benefits.
On the one hand, joining in the design and construction process could help the owner build their ideal houses or office building in some ways. Firstly, the owner who participate in the design process could have their own style house by giving their ideas into the blueprint of the building. secondly, by joining in the construction steps, the owner or the investor can minimize the cost of the building and supervise the whole process more carefully. For example, in many Asian countries, there always have some citizen who really want to build their house in traditional way, in order to do that they take a little control and design the building in their own style.
On the other hand, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. The first prominent justification is that the building might not reach the standard quality, especially the office building because the owner doesn’t have enough experiences in architecture and this is also really dangerous if the building wasn’t built perfectly. secondly, the building might not be as beautiful as the owner imagined because their ideas are not suitable for the whole building. For instance, the office construction must be built in the technical way to ensure the quality reached the highest level.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it is obvious to acknowledge the dominant drawbacks of this proclivity, but the possible benefits of the joining in design and construction process to build the ideal houses and office building should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13898305085 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72225551581 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477966101695 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8123788288 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.818181818 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299080716193 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12357166199 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926959086789 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185782406589 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812262647197 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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