In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation?
It is true that easily designing and constructing houses and office buildings can be implemented individually because there is little inspection from the government. I believe there are arguments both for and against this view.
On the one hand, easily designing and constructing their own houses and offices is harmful in some ways. The first prominent justification is that little control on construction will lead to higher coming costs owing to the fact that the unscheduled urban area will have to pay residents for clearance costs in the future. Furthermore, the more diversity in housing design, the less specific characteristics the city can have. For instance, uncontrolled design may lead to lots of slums and sprawling estates.
On the other hand, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages. Firstly, if there are not any regulations on housing constructing, residents will be able to have higher living standards because they can live in the way that they desire. Secondly, designing our own homes without constraint contributes to increasing the income of architects due to the fact that only when there is a demand for designing, will the architecture industry be promoted. Finally, having little control on office building construction stimulates more creativity for architects to create highlighted buildings for cities. For example, Landmark 81 and Bitexco, symbols for Ho Chi Minh City, are two of the skyscrapers based on little control.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it is obvious to acknowledge the dominant benefits of this inclination, but the possible drawbacks of easily designing and constructing houses and office buildings should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45353159851 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09492894094 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6244850163 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268518332124 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101168927616 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766649141455 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172216881054 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251419210607 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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