Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages of this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
When the issue of sports sponsorship comes into view, there exist conflicting opinions. Many people hold the notion that funds are beneficial to the sports industry; meanwhile, others claim that this brings a great number of drawbacks. This essay aims at discussing both views before presenting my opinion.
On the one hand, there are numerous advantages in subsidizing sports. Firstly, sponsoring creates a variety of chances for players to showcase their talents. Thanks to sponsors, adults can build their career on sports, and at the same time, many unprivileged children and youngsters are able to not only pursue their interests but develop their skills to become sports professors as well. Furthermore, financing sports helps to hold many competitions. In other words, big sport events need a great amount of money from enterprises; thus, founders of these competitions may have to face bankruptcy without this source of money. Take the FIFA World Cup as an illustration. When the World Cup is held, it always attracts many famous sponsors such as Nike, Puma and Adidas. However, in 2002, FIFA World Cup failed to call for support from brands; as a result, the ticket price of this competition doubled and many people could not afford buying one. Consequently, the president of this corporation had to declare bankruptcy for his enormous debt. What can be inferred from this is that sponsorships play a crucial role in the sports industry, especially sport competitions.
On the other hand, sponsorship brings a wide range of drawbacks to sports. A notable disadvantage of backing sports is its effects on audiences and viewers. To be more specific, when a competition is sponsored by banned or restricted brands such as tobacco or cigarettes companies, the viewers are probably affected negatively. The AFC Cup in Vietnam serves as a perfect example of this problem. The number of customers, who are mostly young people, buying tobacco is recorded to rocket after this brand becomes AFC Cup’s sponsor. This directly suggests that fundings from controversial brands and items can have adverse effects on the society, especially fans and spectators of the sport competitions.
In conclusion, although sport benefits extensively from bankrolling, its cons should not be ignored. From my perspective, sponsors should invest more money in this industry because they are vital in fostering young talents and holding competitions, which are indispensable in sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...notion that funds are beneficial to the sports industry; meanwhile, others claim that ...
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Line 3, column 934, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...oubled and many people could not afford buying one. Consequently, the president of thi...
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Line 3, column 1122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...sponsorships play a crucial role in the sports industry, especially sport competitions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33248081841 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89154838453 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590792838875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8651242077 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287124181895 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819172465592 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455434286531 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172542650953 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063981437447 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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