Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvatages of this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
In the modern life, an increasing number of people are concerned about the primary of advertising. Therefore, a profusion of companies sponsors sports as a method of advertising. While many advocate the trend of corporations funding sports activities, others are strongly opposed to this sponsorship. This essay will elaborate on both perspectives.
On the one hand, some people disapprove of advertising in sports. Their main rationale is that companies may promote products that are harmful to public. For example, Budweiser, a leading beverage brand, has sponsored football tournaments around the world to encourage the comsuption of alcohol, despite scieniecific evidence on the damaging effects of alcohol and drinkers’ health. Futhermore, the prevalence of advertisements during sporting events may negative affect the overall event experience. Companies can showcase their products. If the player is unsuccessful, it might affect product sales. For instance, coca cola sponsor for world cup, but cristiano ronaldo refuse this product as well as companies has affected sales.
On the other hand, there are those who argue that the merits of sports sponsorship outweigh the potential disadvantages mentioned above. For sport development, it provides essential funding the purchase of new equipment, payment of staff at venue. Therefore, player can focus on their sport in place of being distracted by finacial worries. For bussinesses, sponsoring sporting events is an excellent opportunity to boost sales of their product. Companies can link their name to successful players such as Lionel Messi, Neymar and Cristina Ronaldo, so people think positively of companies that donate products and equipment.
In conclusion, although sports sponsorship might potentially lead to the promotion of harmful product or a reduced experience. I can belive sinificantly contribute to the development of sports and bussiness. Therefore , government should issue necessary legal frameworks and regulation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many advocates
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8843537415 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10788490424 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636054421769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.307537674 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0526315789 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306360735528 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836951837734 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553850992342 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174342474327 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06746522884 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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