Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh disadvantages?
Most of the countries are focusing to develop their economy which can enrich living standard of population, but there would be few issues raised in the society because of such change. I think, it is more advantageous than demerits of it due to they help to improve public services, reduces unemployment and poverty. In contrast, it may encourage to crime and family crisis.
At the beginning, it can be said that economic growth is the key reason of improving living standard which helps the nation to offer more quality full services for examples health and education. No nation can claimed as a developed country without these services, but they cannot develop it without strong financial backup. In my opinion, only for medical purposes lots of people going abroad for treatment as a result states is losing huge revenues. Similarly, quality full higher education can be provided due to poor economy. So, a strong economy is must for maintaining a benchmark of life. Without doing this, the republic would lose its future leader.
On the other hand, economic advancement may be responsible for devaluing activities for society such as it may provoke stealing and fading family bondage. When economic booming is on the road then people would have lots of property, which leads some people to steal it not because they need it but envy. Another bolt reason might be wealthy country has a good income opportunity so people may not like to stay in a family while they like to live in own way.
In conclusion, revenue development is essential for a country establishment and offering better standard of life for citizens but it is also unforgettable that some social problems may arise as well but development is the things we all want to do.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-05 | m_sepahi@ymail.com | 84 | view |
| 2021-06-24 | vuthuy2210 | 65 | view |
| 2021-04-21 | minhtrile010@gmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2020-11-12 | legiabao9 | 61 | view |
| 2020-11-12 | legiabao9 | 73 | view |
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh disadvantages 78
- Some people think that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for health care and education To what extend do you agree 84
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh disadvantages 67
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y encourage to crime and family crisis. At the beginning, it can be said that ec...
^^^^
Line 2, column 659, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... republic would lose its future leader. On the other hand, economic advancement ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ily while they like to live in own way. In conclusion, revenue development is es...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, then, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91186440678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65312659403 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7278365612 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216964905038 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661904022287 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057954922303 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138181760012 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398263859048 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.