In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, a phenomenon that people stemmed from the rural areas moving to metropolises has become a trend in various nations. The consequence of tendency is the decline of the rural population. From my perspective, this may be considered a downside due to insufficient labor in agricultural-related areas and a heavy pressure on the cities.
On the one hand, the movement of rural people to big cities in hope for bright future will lead to a shortage of workforce in the agricultural domain. This sector invariably requires a significant number of laborers in order to meet the production of a significant figure of consumers pertaining to food. Therefore, should this trend happen, the inadequacy of food products may exist, which causes some problematic issues to the society, including rising price for products and famine, more severely. The typical example is in Vietnam in 1945, when the economic crisis occurred due to the imbalance between the high demand of customers and the shortage of product, especially in the domain of agriculture.
On the other hand, the highly increasing migration to metropolitan areas of rural people will have a harmful impact on these places. Surplus labor can be the root of high unemployment rate in some big cities where the rural, with many disadvantages, would encounter numerous difficulties in landing a stable job. In addition, the excessive movement to the cities will put a notable amount of pressure on the economy, which forces cities to allocate the budget for them. For the rural who can not apply for a job to afford their expenses could become a burden of the cities. The case of this is the increasingly high criminal activities in some big cities in America, mostly of which stem from the rural people.
To conclude, I believe that this trend would leave numerous detrimental effects on both the countryside and urban centers.
The insufficiency of workers in these places relying on agriculture and the excessive number of labor in cities will cause a huge imbalance between the cities and the rural areas, which can badly affect the whole nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91830115524 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1582998735 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.785714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156869023808 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570024798976 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297370835483 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860813758651 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235260160908 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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