In many countries, governments spend a lot of money celebrating national holidays and festivals. However, some people think that spending money on these celebrations
is a waste. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Local authorities are spending a huge amount of fund in celebrating national holidays and festivals in almost all the nations. However, few people feels that spending a lot of money on these is a waste. In my opinion, there are certain other aspects where governments can use this money like feeding poor people.
On the one hand, it has became common across all the nations to celebrate national and festival holidays. Governments are spending lot of money on these days, because it is their responsibility. For example, on Independence day in India, local authorities have to decorate the statues of various rebel warriors, clean the roads, fire works, and so on. Additionally, in festivals many temples are decorated.
On the other hand, instead of wasting money on above mention things, there are other various aspects where government could invest this money. For example, money could be use to feed poor people on these days. With this residents of the nation will get encouragement and might get involved in the same activity. Additionally, such funds can be used in children education welfare. This act will help needy children's who want to study and in turns the nation will receive benefits.
In conclusion, although it is necessary to celebrate the national holidays and festivals, however, in my opinion, the funds should be utilize in the effective and correct manner. Instead of wasting money on fireworks or decorating statues, feeding poor people and investing in children education would be a good initiative. People will become more aware about these issue and might provide support to government to fulfill the task.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16104868914 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73922864909 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6118797846 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337840895587 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113865098197 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767122369909 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218268254753 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661707883556 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.