Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
It has been argued that unemployment payment scheme of national system in a nation where the unemployed person would regularly receive wages encourages the people to not search for employment. Also, it will provide pressure on a country's financial resources. I agree with the aforementioned statement.
There are many nations who provide employment benefit to their citizen, when they have lost their current jobs. Government of this nation offers this benefit in order to fulfill their citizen's basic necessity, however, many people misuse this. To be clearer, person who do not want to work can simply apply for the unemployment benefit and can receive regular wages which helps them to feed themselves and their family. Also, they do not try to find some work because they are being paid by government for free. This behavior of many people leads government towards financial crisis.
There are many people who actually need unemployment benefit by national system. For example, after giving birth to a child mother usually had to search for job in order to give good life to her child. Additionally, a father who has 2 kids and a house wife has just been fired from job due to ramp-down in the organization. Unemployment payment would provide great support to such kind of people.
In order to make this system fair, government should impose some policies and laws. Firstly, person should be eligible for the unemployment benefit only if their bank balance is below basic wages annually. Secondly, there should be time limit from the government of providing free wages. Nevertheless, there are situation where things are not in control of mankind like the situation the whole world has to face during pandemic of covid-19, government should be liberal during such kind of time.
To conclude, though many people misuse the unemployment payment method in various ways, this can me solve with few measures from nation's government. Introducing bank balance limit system and limiting the duration of providing the free wages, will limit the misuse of this benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...ing free wages. Nevertheless, there are situation where things are not in control of mank...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, kind of, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16023738872 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62362872677 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53412462908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2583604434 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6111111111 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255843533665 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834634397114 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646443629064 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158742790974 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980654064246 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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