More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones.
Is this a positive or negative development?
With the advancement and technological growth in Smartphones and internet, people have become addicted to it. Although there are many negative impacts, however, the positive effect outweigh the drawback.
compare to 3 decades ago, everyone has observe a great era of growth in both modern technology as well as in lifestyle. The most important growth is in cell phones. Previously, letters were used to send messages, which usually were taking a lot of time to deliver. however, with the use of cellphones and internet, sending messages has become more easy and speedy, within a fraction of seconds messages are getting delivered between phones. Secondly, many mobile based applications have made our life more easy. For example, dictionary, before we used to keep a paper based dictionary which has been replaced by online dictionary. Another good example is education, which is emerging into providing online classes, like byjus application is widely spread across the globe. Main reason behind byjus application success is that it provides more interactive features and more visual based training that help children to understand the topic clearly.
internet on the other hand is also developing with more and more use of cell phones. cost of internet has been considerably decreasing as compare to past. A good example is JIO internet service provider by famous entrepreneur Mukesh Abnani, which provides internet services at very cheap cost, that allow people to learn via internet.
Since every coin has two sides, depending on mobile has also few drawbacks. First and the most important is people are becoming less healthy. Unlike earlier children used to play more outdoor games, but now they prefer playing games on mobile. Similarly, before people were spending time with each other, however now they are spending more time on social networking sites and connect each other via video calls. people are getting into sedentary lifestyle.
In conclusion, people must be adaptive to the technological changes. cell phones and internet have become a necessary part of our life and it do have good impact across the globe if we use it correctly and in proper way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Compare
...itive effect outweigh the drawback. compare to 3 decades ago, everyone has observe ...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'observed'.
Suggestion: observed
... compare to 3 decades ago, everyone has observe a great era of growth in both modern te...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...era of growth in both modern technology as well as in lifestyle. The most important growth...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...y were taking a lot of time to deliver. however, with the use of cellphones and interne...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mobile seems to be countable; consider using: 'many mobiles'.
Suggestion: many mobiles
...ing delivered between phones. Secondly, many mobile based applications have made our life m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
...ren to understand the topic clearly. internet on the other hand is also developing wi...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cost
... with more and more use of cell phones. cost of internet has been considerably decre...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...and connect each other via video calls. people are getting into sedentary lifestyle. ...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cell
... adaptive to the technological changes. cell phones and internet have become a neces...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...ome a necessary part of our life and it do have good impact across the globe if we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25787965616 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62997918291 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0169733942 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286131664472 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757453203532 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645331377701 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154811887586 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416408794821 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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