In many countries, an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on television and in computer and video games.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern life, advanced technologies have been widespread all over the world. So that they may bring many benefits, however they also have caused some problems. Some people argued that the growth of crime might be caused by violent images which usually show on television, computer and video games. In my view, an increase of crime might be caused by those who use computer and television in bad effects which impact on people’ mind.
First of all, although computer and television have some drawbacks, especially for youths, there have not definitely any reasons that rising of crime only happe...
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there have not definitely any reasons
there are definitely no any reasons
a main reason for increase crime
a main reason for increasing crime
a main reason to increase crime
Sentence: That is to say, many people namely who are unemployed, families break and have not regular activities to do, have caused many psychological problems in people, especially adolescent who do not have enogh knowledge to protect themselves.
Error: enogh Suggestion: enough
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