In many countries insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society?
In many societies nowadays, younger generations tend to behave in a disrespectful manner towards the elderly. As far as i am concerned, there are numerous causes for this saddening reality and its implications are going to be tremendous, which i will discuss in this essay.
A lot of factors concerning young people's attitudes can account for this lack of gratitude. To be more specific, a growing number of individuals have an opinion that those elderly people are burdensome and worthless; their values are underestimated in an unacceptable way. When citizens of working age grow older and come closer to the stage of retirement, they begin to be counted as those who doesn't contribute anything to the financial stability but still rely a lot on the total income of the family. As a result, grandparents and other predecessors have to incur insults, scorn and contempt from others for the fact that they are no longer earning a lucrative amount of money. Their inability to make profits literally equate with lack of care and consideration for them.
Consequently, if there is no improvement in young people's perception of the merits of senior generations, a lot of problems may arise. For instance, a community may witness a staggering rise in the cases of elderly admitted to hospitals because of the ailments related to the absence of happiness and appreciation. Besides, when a society eventually end up adopting and upholding this abhorrent mentality, the overall moral values and ethics of the inhabitants may decline. Therefore, it is true to claim that repercussions of this concerning attitude are countless unless something isdone to prevent it.
In conclusion, this apparent lack of respect compassion for the old boils down to the way the youth assess their values and importance. Besides, a range of consequences resulting from this are affecting communities, globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, may, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21639344262 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08945028068 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7679245074 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217353830034 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693657968418 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420738642341 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133671782529 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376765740076 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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