In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects.
Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
In the present age, the non-stopping process of globalization caused a tendency of international tourism is increasing each year which has become a financial income to be reckoned with, of which has more beneficial to developing countries but more disadvantages for developed countries.
A major advantage of international tourism is the acceleration of the country financial growth. Developing or developed countries constantly have a considerable demand on funds for development of which International tourism demonstrate opportunity of great monetary mobility increased means If the developing countries allow more International tourism would result in more advantages than its drawback. Take some folk developing countries in Asian, India, which has a list of strategies to attract tourist from the world around in turned increased local film industry popularity and beneficial to their growth which now became the most valuable industry in India, for example. If they did not promote international tourism in order to avoid the drawbacks, the growth might have achieved many years later.
Granted, an International tourism might have a negative effect on the local business diversity, but an income growth is favorable to the whole countries in terms of the whole country's Economic G. For developing or developed countries International tourism is vital, and although might detrimental to Cultural Heritage, this could not be done without a sum of money support on providing stable development environment. China, for instance, has up to 50 to 60 ethnic and those develop without central government support has now become a much smaller scale. This example speaks volumes about how maintaining International tourism's advantages outweighed its drawbacks.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of an International tourism are overshadowed by the benefits accruing from a constant source of income. Therefore, having weighted up the pros and cons, I am convinced that all the countries should remain the biggest scale of International tourists come as possible for the sake of countries development, Cultural Heritage and economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, India, which has a list of strategies to attract tourist from the world around...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68535825545 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22433367929 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557632398754 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8615805302 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.909090909 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350229218984 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161231358775 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948603937762 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226506738052 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413658807191 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.5 9.78957915832 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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