In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects.
Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary world, international tourism is a great significant source of income of many countries. Whether the advantages of tourism industry outweigh the drawbacks is arousing debates. This essay will outline both views and give the reason why the benefits are stronger than the detriment.
On the one hand, tourist have a noticeable positive impact on the local economy, especially in the ubiquitous tourist attraction. For instance, in peak season, a country can receive a huge amount of money because of the tourism boom. Another point is that tourism industry can boost the the speed of integration. Since travellers visit a country, they can try and know more about another culture. Therefore global tourist can help promote the development of one country.
On the other hand, there still be several detrimental iffluences of global tourism. The most negative effect that people have to consider is the environment problems. For example, many news have reported about the increase in litter and waste on the beaches which are caused by the soar of tourist in the travelling seasons. Secondly, there can be loss of local custom, thus many tourists do not understand the deep meaning of some traditions. As a result, they cannot distinguish whether it is a cultural identity or an outmoded custom. Nevertheless, if the government can raise awareness of visitors and also local people, these problems will be possibly solved.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons of global tourism ; however, it cannot be denied that tourism industry brings more benefits than problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22745098039 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78273913347 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3978126792 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233195656025 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072217605708 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760283087982 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143370733106 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715465722918 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.