In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?
In nowadays, advertising of alcohol is illegal in numerous nations. This phenomenon is based on the number of accidents due to drunkenness. Another reason is consumption of alcohol can cause health problems.
Nowadays, alcohol has developed to be a modern culture, always there have been as the important part in some events. Introducing alcohol it means to let the negative impacts to people such as lack of concentration and unconscious. What is the consequence of these? If it happens, these impacts can be the main reason related to some accidents after consumption the alcohol. Evidently, based on report from Kompas.Com , one of the biggest electronic news in Indonesia, in the new year’s eve 2021 there were a lot of traffic accidents in the big cities like Jakarta, Bandung, Semarang, and Makassar which were supposedly caused by alcohol.
Moreover, supporting to consume alcohol will explain in real that there is no more attention about healthy factor in the society. That is why, advertising alcohol should be regulated in the policy in order to the number of healthy life can be increased, so some diseases caused by alcohol can be solved. Since 2005, the government of Argentina have decided to make regulations about alcohol, one of the policy explains that the brands of beer cannot exist in the public area. This policy have succeeded in being one of the best method to tackle negative effects of alcohol.
In conclusion, denial to advertise alcohol will give positive things such as reducing traffic accidents and increasing people’s understanding about healthy life. If it is possible, these issues have to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19475655431 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85530180278 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0679736423 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139289422393 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559385566922 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058893809709 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984672024549 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345600511454 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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