In many countries, the number of young people are more as compared to the other age of people. Discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of having more young people in any nation.
In majority of commonwealth, the count of immature people are more as analogies to the distinct age of people. This tendency have both upper hand and drawback. Both the merits and demerits of this trend are discussed below.
To begin with, having more youth as compared to other age of people is quite beneficial. We can produce more number of skilled manpower for the development of nations. Youths can be used in politics as the current politics scenario is covered by aged people. Education system of a nation could be upgraded to next level. Ideas and knowledge of youths' can be appropriate for the production of new technology. Defense policy of a nation would be strong by admitting fresh youth in military force. For instance, politics is being ruined by corrupted aged people. If politics is given to youth the politics could be developed to another level.
On the flip side, if state contains more youth then kinds of crime can be arise. Loot, robbery and many more are the example of anti-social activities. Drug abuse, smuggling, smoking, alcoholism could be the main hindrances in the development of society. There could be lack of accomplished human resources in current time. Due to the unemployment problem government can face brain-drain knot. Likewise, many countries are facing this challenge in present context.
To sum up, this trend has both the sides; positive and negative. Positive side is stronger than the negative one due to more positive factors. Therefore, having ruling number of youths in nation is helpful for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so, then, therefore, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05447470817 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70032743064 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.2779550356 49.4020404114 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.95 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.85 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210788485745 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663094194582 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803310625842 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126890554926 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426272125063 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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