Consumer goods hold and imperative place in our daily life. It is irrefutable that nowadays, instead of using the products for long time, people prefer to throw and buy new things. Is this trend have any reasons and effects? Yes, the technogical advancement and raised standard of living which is a complete wastage of talent and increase burden on professionals.
There are two main reasons which promotes the concept of throw away culture. To begin with, the latest and continuous changing technology is the biggest cause of this trend. There are plethora of products available in the market which attracts people and appeal them to buy despite of having that product already. Take gadget such as mobile phone as an example, companies are launching new android phones every month with exotic features and people are purchasing the extravagent phones to enjoy the latest features. Basically, it obsoletes the technology. In addition, flaunting in front of the society is another cause. Buying new products every now and then elevates the standard amongst colleagues and relatives. Hence, these two reasons contributes to this phenomenon.
There are few problems associated with the throw away concept. Firstly, it imposes a burden on the shoulders of the professionals as they rigorously work to develop new technology, however, it rapidly becomes obsolete and they have to come up with new ideas which contributes to increase the mental pressure. Secondly, it promotes the wastage of talent and artificial intelligence. For instance, a car has been desigmed to work for 10 years and consumer uses it for 2 years and buy a new car with advanced features which is clearly a wastage of technology.
To conclude, there are various causes and issues associated with throw away society. People should seriously consider this situation and alleviate these problems from the society which will be beneficial for both individuals and companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...y is another cause. Buying new products every now and then elevates the standard amongst colleague...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26045016077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76385217352 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.480330893 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149260906175 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460359970996 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418778768051 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104097503865 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367359381607 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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