In many countries, people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away.
What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?
These days and time, most of the countries are being influenced by throwaway cultures. In my perspective, what I believe that this is on growing issues and should be curtailed as far as possible. The clear portray of the reasons and risks that can be faced by human beings through throwaway society will outline below.
The foremost cause of this trend is the busy lifestyle. People have time to fix things that have stopped working instead they rely on new stuff in the market. Another reason is that of irresistible advertisements. Nowadays, adverts are highly impacted on people's daily life. As a result, people tend to replace goods such as furniture, households goods in a regular manner. I myself witnessed that, my mom changes her mobile phone every six months as an effect of prompts on television which is one of the useless things.
It is undeniable that this subject leads to serious threats to the environment. Firstly, if people used things for a short period of time and throw that will directly affect the natural resources. Thousands of trees are cutting down to make households tools and other stuff which is mainly due to this concerning issue. There is no doubt that if we could not minimize then one day our resources might vanish out. On the other hand, uses of non-recyclable goods have been declining the quality of soil which could result in scarcity of food in the future.
To recapitulate, The world is being materialistic day by day. Law enforcement agency should conduct a public awareness program as well as individuals must be a concern for this detrimental subject of the 21st century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a regular manner" with adverb for "regular"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ods such as furniture, households goods in a regular manner. I myself witnessed that, my mom change...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...stly, if people used things for a short period of time and throw that will directly affect the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, well, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89855072464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70775101587 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7940147669 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176465415483 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506439771536 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474322342703 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090372090842 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334236595899 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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