In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
These days and time the number of people who became overweight has increased and their physical fitness and health are declining. This essay will first discuss the reasons behind this growing issues and address some viable solutions.
The foremost cause for increasing average bodyweight of people is rising in the consumption of convenience food items. These days more and more people are relying on the junk food items as it contains fat and calories which lead to overweight problem. also, due to the fact that business competition is increasing day by day people have to work longer hours and they do not have time in doing physical exercise. As a result, serious health problems and obesity are increasing in large number. Incite one example, The Himalayan Times reported that, consumption of junk food leads to detrimental effects in people health and busy life schedule has created lots of problem regarding health.
There are several things that people can do to resolve the problems. One of them is that people should be more selective while choosing their diets and make a habit of having green vegetables, fruits, and juice rather than consuming package food. The other thing is that people should do more physical exercise and burn more calories in their life. A researched carry out by The World Health Organisation reported that, doing daily exercise the level of fitness increases and problems related to body weight can be minimized.
To recapitulate, it is true that an unhealthy lifestyle and business competition are major causes for increasing weight issue and to address such problems regular fitness exercise and healthy food habits can be done.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ories which lead to overweight problem. also, due to the fact that business competit...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...alth and busy life schedule has created lots of problem regarding health. There are several ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, while, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53642307509 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7215924731 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280741374666 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107266993657 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478358851191 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165760425275 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311130525943 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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