In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

it is true fact, that now a days health is serious issue. In many nations the mean weight of person is gain weight and their fitness level decrease.this write up will shed light on their reasons and solutions

to begin with, the causes today generation has workaholic so the prefer street or outside food. for instance today people have very less time because of busy work schedule, so the eat packed food without knowing their effects on heath as a result their heath rate decline. in addition, the regularly doing attends party in which the eat fried food which is the main reason of low fitness level. next to it, toady generation does not like cooking .such as, home cooking is time-consuming process due to busy schedule, they avoid cooking at house and orders foods from food corner regularly, which affects their immune system as a result low fitness rate

furthermore, to tackle these problem, people should avoid the iced meals and know the nutrition value of home cooking. To elaborate this , cooking at home has huge benefits on health because nutrient is higher in home cooking rather the frozen meals . another solution is that, do regular exercise . to illustrate this. doing daily exercise improve health and repair our immune system. this also over come the danger cardiac decrease.

To put in the nut shell, health is wealth , to manage health and avoid decrease we all should take care our fitness and do routine exercise . also must eat home food or raw vegetable for betterment of health

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89494163424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32794704648 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.282102092 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156114946166 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524550158674 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367831872835 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991585897377 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249630298065 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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