In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In some countries, health and
fitness levels are declining as a a result average weights of people are
proliferating. This essay will discuss the several problems due to lack of fitness
and health and similarly various solutions to overcome these problems.
Firstly, fitness is a major factor for healthy person. There are numerous problems like
heart diseases, obesity, over weight and so on will arise without a proper exercise.
According to television channel report, above stated problems are noticed less in people who
prefer to do exercise. Due to advancement in technology people are habituated to less physical
involvement in many activities like choosing vehicle instead of walk, taking lift and many such
activities. Though technology reduces the physical stress of an individual, it indirectly affecting
on one's physical fitness.
Secondly, regime should take step forward to educate people about future problems by various advertisements,
internet pop-ups and so on. Additionally, it is not sole responsibility of government, an individual should contribute his efforts
to decline health problems and encourage their family members without being affected to those diseases. Free gyms,
parks and better infrastructure should be developed by the higher authorities to encourage people's interest towards.
Finally,an individual should attend for regular checkups to avoid being affected by the serious diseases and they
should be eradicated in the initial steps. Avoid taking cab, elevator, and do physical exercise when ever a person get
a free time.
In conclusion, it is necessary to focus on health and physical conditions by implementation of little changes in the
life in this modern world. People will able to lead better life by exercise, therefore life expectancy on a nation
will proliferate and avoid serious problems faced in later decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65734265734 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94441304746 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3871613375 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196370622627 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694546858953 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636387853162 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625746969799 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569461106811 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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