In many countries, people are spending more hours at their workplace. Why is that? Is that a negative or positive development?
Recent decades have witnessed the proliferation of price so the employees have to devote almost time on their workloads in order to cover the basic necessities. In this essay, I will discuss about the benefits and detrimentals of this trend and why I believe that this situation is a negative development.
On the one hand, there are several advantages if people us almost time for working. One of the discernible one is the increasing of company’s revenue. Indeed, when people devote their personal time for working, they can enhance their working performance, which can facilitate the ambitious employees will earn enough money to manage the basic essentials. Another benefits is incresing tax revenue. Undoutbly, if the firms earn more turnover, tax contributors will contribute enomous tax from business activities for the local authority. Therefore, the gorvenment will have sufficient finance to invest to other needed areas, such as: education and public healthcare service.
On the other hand, it is true that if residents spend a plenty of time for occupation, they may have some drawbacks. One of the most crucial reasons is individuals can have several health conditions. Indeed, If individuals devote all their time on the computers’ sreen, the staffs can be physical and mental exhausion, which will rise highly possibities of the suffering from health conditions. Another one is causing intensive distance between each family members. Indubitably, by staying too much on the companies, parents can have limited time for their older generation and children. Consequently, the family circle cannot tightening and children are easily to be negative members in later life as they cannot be nurtured by their parents.
In conclusion, when adult use most of time on the companies can help increasing the turnover of the firms and tax revenue for the government. I think that this phenomenon is a negative development because this situation can cause some health conditions to individuals and prevent them from spending time with their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...n their workloads in order to cover the basic necessities. In this essay, I will discuss about th...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... the basic essentials. Another benefits is incresing tax revenue. Undoutbly, if th...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to increase' or 'increase'.
Suggestion: to increase; increase
... most of time on the companies can help increasing the turnover of the firms and tax reven...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33846153846 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90713710613 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2410464306 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116182954829 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349903365424 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358007587589 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749902730037 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011250794901 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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