In many countries, people decide to have children at a later age than in the past. Why?
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, in many countries, young generations often have a decision that having baby at an older age than older generations in the past.
Basically, people at the present time have different mindsets from their previous generation. In the past, people often be forced to get married and have a kid at an extremely young age. Currently, because of changes of the social, their mindsets are also catch up with the times, people prefer to have a stable finances before they have a kid to have a better life. Moreover, some individuals choose to get married late because they want to enjoy their youth because our youth is short and we only live once.
On the one hand, people nowadays often want to consolidate their basic financial status and develop themselves to help their kids have a better life in the future. People in today’s world need to study a lot and they also need many years to have a stable job and stable income. For example, a businessman needs many times to make their brand become famous and get a steady customer source, they also need to change a lot to catch up with the times because of the rapid change of the social. Due to the stable of their finances, they can prepare their financial status carefully for their kids. Moreover, the overpopulation in our world these days is growing strongly so having children at a late age also can prevent overpopulation.
On the other hand, having children at a late age will have some risks for people. Older parents may find it difficult to keep up with their children because of the distance of the generation in a family. For example, when people have their kids at 30 years old, their kids will puberty when they are more than 40 years old and there could be some misunderstanding in family because kids in puberty age are often hard to understand. But it still can be solve if we choose to learn how to understand our kids.
In conclusion, people nowadays often choose to have a kid at an old age because they need to prepare for their financial status or enjoy their youth. It will be good because they and their kids will have a better life in the future and response their needs. Beside that, having children at an old age can lead to misunderstanding in the family because of the distance of their generation. In my opinion, the advantages overshadow the disadvantages because we still have many ways to avoid and solve the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'caught'.
Suggestion: caught
... of the social, their mindsets are also catch up with the times, people prefer to hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65887850467 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55461780821 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411214953271 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8455386143 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158790398818 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713468129071 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047181522676 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117060728563 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162986151078 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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