In many countries, people now wears western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why it this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Clothes which are produced in western styles seem to be dominated in many parts of the world. While for adults comfort of these clothes is appealing, youngsters probably choose them due to the influence of celebrities. I think, the situation far from negative, even though some may disagree.
European or American style outfits can be suitable for different age groups and because of this many people opt for them instead of traditional way of dressing. Many adults purchase this new style, as they feel comfortable in them and can wear on a daily basis. Youngsters, on the other hand, choose this type of clothing to follow their favorite celebrities. In fact, a particular design or color becomes popular among young generation, after a sportsman or well known model promotes it.
Some people may claim that this trend results in the loss of national identity, but in my view, it is not as unfavorable as they think. Majority of people wear these clothes, since they more affordable than traditional ones. In fact, providing that one wants to purchase conventional pieces of clothing, they are likely to cost a fortune. By contrast western-style jeans or jackets are mass produced and therefore, have cheaper price tags. Certainly, this is feature that is significant for most customers.
To conclude even though there is a fair chance that traditional dresses may loose their value as a consequence of this trend, I am convinced that comfortable clothing is necessary for ordinary people for every day situations. As far as I am concerned, people can wear their national costumes in special occasions, like wedding parties of festivals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Message: Did you mean 'for everyday'?
Suggestion: for everyday
...othing is necessary for ordinary people for every day situations. As far as I am concerned, p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons, like wedding parties of festivals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09259259259 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80867019386 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7786102413 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269226433963 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863551896728 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576181984887 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155724176412 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413233562399 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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