In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses such as food and drink industry. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages ?
In the modern day, plastic containers have become well-known items being used in the food and beverage industry. Manufacturers and individuals might benefit from such a switch, however, I am convinced that its adverse implications are more considerable.
On the one hand, plastic containers could bring several benefits to companies and users. First of all, some of the noticeable advantages of plastic are its durability, weight and resistance, consequently, plastic containers are widely used among food and drink supply chains for many purposes in order to prevent leakage and damage. Furthermore, using plastic containers could help manufacturers and restaurants to reserve their food quality as well as prolonging the shelf-life of products, providing these sellers more opportunities to diversify their takeaway or delivery services. Finally, as raw materials of plastics such as crude oil are fairly cheap; therefore, manufacturers tend to use plastic containers in order to minimize their production costs, hesitating to make a transition to other materials.
However, I believe the consequences of utilizing plastic containers are more significant. Since plastic could remain for millions of years due to its durability, it is difficult for people to destroy them without causing harmful effects on the environment. Firstly, the incineration of plastic products would release huge amounts of exhaust fumes, which are detrimental to the atmosphere as well as aggravating the deterioration of global warming. Secondly, some irresponsible individuals even dump garbage directly into the ocean, this might release microscopic particles from plastic decomposition, posting a threat to the entire ecosystem. As a result, these plastic debris once were eaten by the marine animals and remained in their organisms, which could have long-term impacts on human well-being who might consume them with some significant health problems such as cancer.
In conclusion, despite some advantages of plastic containers that give them a comparative edge over other materials in the food and drink industry, I would argue that their negative effects on the environment and human health could not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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...d human health could not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09755820774 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5615344739 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.75 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2430423904 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093745142697 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557049058601 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153677320479 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536673788474 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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