In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses such as food and drink industry. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
These days, it seems that more and more plastic containers are utilized by businesses than ever before. Although I agree that this trend might bring about some beneficial impacts, I believed that these positive impacts are overshadowed by many negative influences.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that the prevalence of plastic containers has revolutionized human life. First, plastic has always been a cheap material, which would act as a stimulus for beverage companies to cut down expenses on manufacture. Recent researches indicated that ever since those companies make the most of plastic in lieu of other materials including glass or tin, their average spending on raw materials reduces by at least 30%. Another striking feature of using plastic containers is its convenience. For instance, in the proliferation of food delivery, utilizing plastic boxes would allow customers to have more substantial options of dishes with cheaper prices, thereby facilitating the revenue of such restaurants.
On the other hand, I believe that the advantages pale in comparison with accompanying drawbacks. First, plastic has always been posing a threat to the environment. It is a scientifically-proven view that plastic would hardly ever biodegrade. Certain studies showed that plastic accounted for 70% of the daily amount of waste produced - a remarkable percentage. If the consumption of plastic continues to increase in long term, the whole world will soon stink in a mountain-rubbish of plastic. Second, the wildlife impact of plastic is undeniably staggering. Scientists pointed that one of the most common culprits accounting for the death of animals was plastic trash, as they accidentally consumed small pieces of plastic or they got stuck in plastic boxes, unable to get out, and then starved to death.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of using plastic containers are more significant than the possible benefits in modern society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, at least, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37987012987 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08122907666 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62012987013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3687001459 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244295060546 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790636355915 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581662908146 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148637985103 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220283765762 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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