Everyday urban people are facing plethora of difficulties related to their surroundings however ,it is often argued that the condition of a life is becoming worst in urban areas. I am going to discuss some main reasons as well as solutions of this notion.
Initially, almost most of the Metropolitan citizens are facing environmental problems. Everyday new manufacturing plants are installed in these areas which are the root cause of water pollution and air pollution as that are emitting large amount of a smoke via chimneys and polluting thousand litres of drinking water everyday. The increasing number of automobiles are also contributing in it by releasing carbon dioxide through silencers which creates smoky clouds, depletes Ozone layer and giving birth to diseases like asthma and eye redness etcetera.
However as the solution lies in the problem as well.People should raise their voice against manufacturing industries and try to convince the legal authorities to set up it in the outskirts of the city. Secondly they should also try to give more preference to eco friendly automobiles like electric cars and bicycles to make improvement in the town. Last but not least they should also use car pool to make this trend downwards and for the betterment of the locality.
In conclusion if the people would not give preference to it then they will have to face its harmful consequences.
- In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it? 11
- Nowadays,sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. What is the reason? Do you think it is a positive development? 56
- Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- The world of work is changing rapidly employees would not be able to depand on the same job or working condition for a long time in near furture 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es related to their surroundings however ,it is often argued that the condition of...
^^
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y new manufacturing plants are installed in these areas which are the root cause ...
^^
Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...t of a smoke via chimneys and polluting thousand litres of drinking water everyday. The ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...uting thousand litres of drinking water everyday. The increasing number of automobiles a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leasing carbon dioxide through silencers which creates smoky clouds, depletes Ozo...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ike asthma and eye redness etcetera. However as the solution lies in the problem as...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess etcetera. However as the solution lies in the problem as well.People shoul...
^^
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...e solution lies in the problem as well.People should raise their voice against manufa...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87111574697 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3488351136 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.222222222 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0441012395043 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0162475798812 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0150838886214 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0227899424472 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142667701898 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.