In many countries, schools have several problems with students’ behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
There are various problems in the school about behavior of students in many nations. These problems are influenced by two main causes, lack of parent attentions and bad communication between teacher and students. Therefore, the parent of students have to participate in the growth of students, and the teacher have to be aware if every student have different way to communicate.
Lack of parent attentions for student will give negative impact to their behavior not only in school but their environment too. The cause happens because most of parent in the world have to work so that they have not much time with their kids. Giving more attentions and aware about the role as a parent to student is the best solutions to tackle this problem. For example, based on research that was conducted by AIR in 2000showed the happiest student in the world there was in Finland because the parents in this country was given the big portion to teach their kids especially about attitude and behavior.
Meanwhile, bad communication between student and teacher often happen in the school because they give same attention to all students which every student have different character. So awareness and about this problem and finding new methods of teaching must be done. For instance, some teachers in Finland give teaching that combine with some games in order to students become active and happy to learn moreover the school involve psychologist to give suggestions in their curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06995884774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60602698629 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526748971193 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7444683034 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221198706929 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103662992465 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051653485723 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161672403841 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137597118425 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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