The aggressive behavior of the student becoming a mundane issue in all countries. There is a significant problem associated with it which require a solution. In this essay I will provide a reason behind this issue and solution to overcome this issue.
The main challenge related to this issue, Nowadays, Majority of students attracting towards social media, Internet, Flims and video games which mostly contain harsh things, So they implement in real life resulted aggresive behavior in school .secondly, Non-suitable surrounding environment at home and school. If parents and teachers behaving inappropriate way in front of childrens, Then they percive and implement in their own life, which makes them behaving aggresively in school premises. The research have shown that the majority acts of violence were committed by people who have abusive parents.
Last but not least, The lack of parents and teacher guidence about how children should suppose to behave socially. Because, Majority of parents are working so they unable keep attention on children throuhout the day and teaching them valuable lesson of life.
However, There are solution to this dillema is that, Teacher should be friendly with students so that children could express their point of view which makes easier for teacher to understand their opinions to mould them. Moreover, In school there must be physical activity like various sports, swimming in order to make them spent their time more productive way. which will helps them to keep their mind relax and deprive stress so they can well concentrate on study. Furthermore, There should be always one person around them to look at them all time and keeps away from external influences such as; T.V,internet and video games and flims which contain violences.
To put into nutshell, Aggresive behavior of students is a endangered issue for many countries. However, There are many remedy to overcome this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28896103896 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59290804312 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6835352808 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1362511381 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542931399588 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039663091101 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879854687689 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590196675294 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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