In last two decades, Perception of our society has changed completely. Currently, Majority of women are preferring to stay outside of the home like men by involving in a job or personal business. Thereby, The cases of young criminals have been increasing. In this essay, I will discuss this topic along with the reasons why I agree with this statement?.
Nowadays, Women in our society are competing with male equally across all sectors of our society. Currently, More women tend to do either a job or their own business. Thus, They can not give valuable time to their children, Which resulted in an increasing number of the young criminals. The main reason why I strongly agree with the above statement.
Because Back in past days the accountability of work and bring bread were of only men, Women were allowed to only to stay at home and take care of their family and nurture children. Therefore the number of young prison were least as compared to the present era. Due to swiftley progression of our society has incresed the number of working women. Hence, culminated the growing rate of crime in early age. The main reason behind this issue is that women are not able to take care of their children, Most of the time women tends to stay away from home. Which leads to children become alone and depress
to cope with this depression they involve in juvenile deliquency such as drugs and others immoral activities.
To put in a nutshell, There are many drawbacks because of working women like juvenile deliquency. However, This dillema can be solved if women could manage balance between work life and familly necessities.
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 96
- Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experience 56
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 78
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In last two decades, Perception of our society has changed co...
^^
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ompletely. Currently, Majority of women are preferring to stay outside of the home like men by...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of the home like men by involving in a job or personal business. Thereby, The c...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons why I agree with this statement?. Nowadays, Women in our society are compe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s all sectors of our society. Currently, More women tend to do either a job or th...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ongly agree with the above statement. Because Back in past days the accountabi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e of their family and nurture children. Therefore the number of young prison were least a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s drugs and others immoral activities. To put in a nutshell, There are many dra...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52934880455 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8921452932 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229990535303 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072099348852 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564839039413 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11765192445 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500344205362 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.