In many countries, smoking is illegal in public places. many people believe this ban as justified.
do you agree or disagree?
Smoking has been banned in public places like parks, hospitals, public transport and
restaurants in many nations. This essay agrees with this initiative because it reduces the
harmful effects of passive smoking and also encourages smokers to quit.
The primary reason why making it illegal to smoke in public makes sense is preventing
people from having to breathe in second-hand smoke. Passive smoking can lead to many
smoking-related diseases such as lung cancer, heart disease and stroke, and is something
that non-smokers cannot avoid in the presence of a smoker. The British Medical
Association found that non-smokers who were regularly exposed to tobacco smoke were 4
times more likely to develop lung cancer than those who did not have to breathe in
second-hand smoke.
The second main reason is that this ban helps those addicted to cigarettes quit their habit.
When smokers and non-smokers socialise together, the smokers are often ostracised from
the group because they have to leave the company of everyone else if they want to light up.
As a result, smokers who decided to quit would feel more a part of the social gatherings
they attend, and this should encourage people who smoke to give it up. This has proven
particularly effective in Ireland, the first country to introduce a nationwide ban, where
people have to leave a bar or restaurant and smoke outside.
In conclusion, making it against the law to smoke around strangers should be encouraged
because it prevents innocent people from dying of passive smoking and reduces the number
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2431372549 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61101090223 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7077142506 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.7 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251136376343 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111117418976 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740059136573 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766595749982 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720592363298 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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