Many countries spend much money in developing tourism industry. Tourism is often considered as a promising industry that supports economic development. However, some people think that it destroys natural surroundings and traditions. Which do you agree with?
In this age and era, nations are helping themselves by allotting tourism budgets to attract tourists around the globe. While it is worth considering that tourism massively aids profitable resources for a country, it can also cause destruction to the natural environment and culture. This essay will argue that why tourism should be promoted for moneymaking purposes even though there are chances of dismantling nature.
To commence with, it is universally accepted that travelers traveling to a country can become a considerable income resource for a nation. They pre-plan their budget and spend a great amount of money in the visiting country which certainly assists the country's economy. The recent news report states that there was a rapid increase in the number of foreigners who wanted to see the northern areas of Pakistan which extensively helps them in repaying their debt to IMF. For these reasons, Pakistan is now progressively increasing its tourism development budget for the next ten years.
Conversely, many people claim that travelers are also one of the factors of destruction to nature as well as local heritage. Visitors often cause pollution as they do not take care about keeping things clean around them which eventually creates a number of environmental problems and It is because they do not treat the foreign land as their homeland. For instance, Pakistani citizens lodge several complaints to the mayor about tourists who were caught throwing garbage on land instead of recycling even though trash cans were placed around them.
This essay argued that with no doubt, tourism assists a country's economy in a great manner; however, it is likely that it will bring some natural destruction and disobeying culture too. It seems to me that nations should definitely invest in tourism to attract tourists to make huge profits but they should involve strict law and order to avoid the destruction of nature and culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, may, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20063694268 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66656376159 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.7562352987 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181323362173 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645281356399 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354142506177 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103913823808 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020904874964 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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