In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
The emergence of single-person households and nuclear families over large, extended families is a dominant trend all over the world nowadays. I strongly believe this is a negative development.
The trend of decreasing family size signifies the weakening of the traditional family support network, and this development can negatively impact children while they’re growing up. Parents living alone of in a nuclear family can feel immense stress when taking care of a child, not only mentally but financially as well. Not having grandparents or older relatives to help with taking care of children, parents have to often turn to nannies, babysitters, or after-school clubs to take care of their younger children, while older children may be left by themselves after school and during holidays. This lack of adult influence results in friends, the internet, and television becoming the primary influences on children’s behaviour which has been linked to a rise in psychological and behavioural problems among the young.
In addition to this, living alone can be a cause of negative psychological effects because of reduced human interaction. People living by themselves have no one to talk to at home, so sharing problems or expressing emotion becomes difficult. Much needed human interaction, which is aplenty in a large family, is hence replaced by passive distractions such as video games, television, online social activities, or surfing the internet. Living such a lifestyle is associated with high levels of boredom, loneliness, and feelings of isolation all of which are factors that are linked with an increased risk of mental illness.
To conclude, in my opinion, this trend of rise in nuclear families or living alone is worrying as people flourish in large family groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38434163701 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97232499441 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5575888399 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250155961398 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104372735495 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925974350314 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187494837771 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906256026305 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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