In many countries, the traditional of families having several generations living together is disappearing. What are reasons for this trend, and is it a positive or negative development.
In conjunction with the development of society, people tend to live independently. As a consequence, families with numerous generations living together are no longer typical. In this essay, I will present the reasons, pros and cons of this lifestyle.
Firstly, the younger generation wants independence and privacy. The self-reliant lifestyle is believed to help young people have their own property and control their lives. this way of living will create more motivation for the young population to work; therefore, they will make more property and develop the economy. Hence, the young generation is able to pay for their income taxes and rent. However, the more people choose to live independently, the more pressure there is on finding housing. For instance, the percentage of homeless people in the US increased by 22% in 2022 because too many people moved out of their homes and the states could not solve the problem of a lack of housing.
Secondly, it is about the generation gap. In different periods, generations do not have the same way of thinking; thus, generations find it difficult to understand each other, which leads to unnecessary arguments. they will be more comfortable and have a better quality of life whenever they live on their own. Nevertheless, if the old generation cannot take care of themselves, then when the young generation gets old, they will be put in a similar situation, and the cycle continues.
In conclusion, the traditional way of life where multiple generations live in the same house has both advantages and disadvantages. I believe that everyone can consider and select the path that is best for them. The significant things that create erstanding between each member.
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- In many countries the traditional of families having several generations living together is disappearing What are reasons for this trend and is it a positive or negative development 61
- In many countries the traditional of families having several generations living together is disappearing What are reasons for this trend and is it a positive or negative development 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17204301075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93499149047 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5529490965 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222313706725 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07046740927 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400387397731 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134922725469 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395300427283 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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