In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food which is having a negative effect on both family and society. How far this statement is true use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as telelphone calls,internet,e-mails etc. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era of today, technology advances have brought many changes in the world.Some people believe that face to face communication more beneficial than online communication.I agree with this statement up to a great extent.this essay intends to discuss the reasons behind my ideology.
To embark with,large amount of pros are associated with this idea.The first and foremost benefit is to get superior understanding through the traditional way of conveyance .when people interact with each other by face to face there will less chances of flaws.As regards,interacting in this way can help to concentrate on the topic as well as the face expression of the other personality.To justify, masses can read their face expressions through which judgement can be done as well as it can boost up their confidence level.Moreover,they can ask anything at the same time.
Furthermore, face to face communication can form a strong bond with each other.To expand, when humans are connected with each other by this way,this will make them feel more cosy.For instance,in a business meeting,number of people interacting with each other in classical way instead of online interface,it will expand their business as well their employees relationship.Finally, through this way,masses can get quick responses rather than the online means.In other words,people do not need to wait for the responds.this will help to save the precious time.
In the culmination of the above discussion,interacting in person can not be replaced by any other means such as telephone calls, internet, e-mails and so on.Personally,I believe, traditional way of conveyance is best way to unterstand clearly as compared to other types of conveyance.
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- In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food which is having a negative effect on both family and society. How far this statement is true use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Face to face communicat 61
- Face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as telelphone calls,internet,e-mails etc. Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as regards, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49812734082 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54104747775 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.623591066 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 367.0 106.682146367 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.75 20.7667163134 321% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.25 7.06120827912 471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926223065673 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663726374537 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308156117737 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663726374537 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308156117737 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.9 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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