Growing rate of truancy among children is, unquestionably, a concerning issue which needs immediate attention. Numerous factors are responsible for this problem, which surely affect students as well as parents in many ways. Therefore, effective approaches should be adopted to curb this problem.
Starting with the factors, which are triggering this problem exponentially, first one is the lack of interest to study among young children. They are not engaged in practical learning for most of the times, but are forced to acquire bookish knowledge only. They are overburdened with preparing assignments and exhaustive notes. Teaching methodology is obsolete in many schools around the world, which does not make students' s learning an interesting and enjoyable experience.
Besides this, peer pressure is another reason of young pupils being disinterested in attending schools. In adolescence age, children are quite vulnerable and they are, sometimes, swayed away by the activities of their seniors, friends and class- mates. They love to explore a fascinating and carefree lifestyle, so, find attending school a real hindrance in enjoying freedom.
Throwing light on the devastating consequences of this growing trend, first and foremost is that country will lack number of skilled and knowledgeable professionals in the future. Additionally, it will hinder the overall development of a child if he or she skips school at very early age. Without any doubt, they will indulge into anti- social activities if not guided properly.
To conclude, children should be motivated by parents and teachers in many ways to keep their enthusiasm intact for studying in school. Many strategies should be adopted by school managements to make their learning experience more efficient and worth - enjoying.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...tudents as well as parents in many ways.Therefore, effective approaches should be adopted...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould be adopted to curb this problem. Starting with the factors, which are tri...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nowledgeable professionals in the future.. Additionally, it will hinder the overal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03042143931 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5805226794 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137058222855 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412227149599 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463708671697 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075161092696 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599215763576 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...tudents as well as parents in many ways.Therefore, effective approaches should be adopted...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould be adopted to curb this problem. Starting with the factors, which are tri...
^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nowledgeable professionals in the future.. Additionally, it will hinder the overal...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03042143931 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5805226794 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137058222855 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412227149599 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463708671697 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075161092696 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599215763576 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.