In many countries, young people become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. what are the reasons and what can be done about it?
It is certainly true that young people are the backbone of every nation and they play a crucial role in the progress of the country. but in the majority of the states, they are sad in spite of that they are wealthy, healthy and live a long life. there are many reasons behind this and solutions are also here to overcome this problem.
The first and foremost reason is masses become materialistic with the trend of modernization. they give more importance to non-living things and there and there is no place of emotions, love, care, and feelings in their life. secondly, the trend of living has been changed among people in comparison to past time. in past time folks live together in joint families and they share their sorrows and happiness with each other which gave them peace and calm mind. but nowadays, youth give preference to nuclear families and they want to live independently. as a result, there is no one with whom they can share their problems.
Every problem is born with a solution and there are a number of solutions to solve this problem. the major solution is people should adopt the way of simple living and high thinking. this thing makes their life stressless. furthermore, parents should teach their young ones about the cultural and traditional values. for instance, parents should represent themselves as role models for their children because most of the things they learn from their elders. instead of this, moral values should be taught in schools and colleges because teachers are the second, with whom they spend most of their time after parents.
To concludes, young ones are the nation builders and it is vital that they become stressfree in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86851211073 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40770783684 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9656052834 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186967364995 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656873803915 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319187065361 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12424170284 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352492547359 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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