Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from the prison.
Is it guranteed that criminals, after spending much time in jail, will come out to be a completely moral person? This question is quiet debatable. Many criminals keep on partaking their previous criminal activites despite spending time in confinements. Not only will this essay provide reasons why this problematic trend is happening, but will also suggest three solutions that could allay the problem.
Firslty, the main reason why the culprits return in their previous criminal activities is that punishment in form of prison does not normally change overall criminal mentality of the prisoners. To make the matter worse, most of the prisons in the world are breeding ground for criminal activities, given the fact that prison provides site for forming nexus between criminals of various backgrounds which motivates criminals to continue their activities evern after they are acquited. Even if, the prison is able to change the criminal attitude mentally, they are not welcomed by the society because of speculation that criminal activities will be repeated by the person. Due to this, the former criminal becomes jobless which coerce him to take criminal path again.
In order to alleviate the problem, several steps could be taken. Firstly, incumbent criminal department of the country should curtail connection between the criminals so that they do not form abysmal plan inside their command. Secondly, government must provide job oriented training program inside the prison so that after the criminals are freed they get employment opportunities. Thirdly, society should forgo the prejudice against former criminal ,and treat them as equal part of the community.
In conclusion, the above three factors drive criminals to continue criminal activities ;while, the three reforms suggested above will help ameliorate this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 450, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53356890459 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63738727902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2326233441 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21784756167 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807459955415 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634870030425 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125036434362 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651043616015 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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